(be sure to read the
Prologue first)
Nearby town of
Glass’s Hallow
Was close to docks.
It could not know
Any form of riches because
Ustufas’s great rock
sea does
Snap up most. This
was poor mine town,
Not even see by
raccoons, sound
Only in tough,
bread-lacked bodies.
Yet they don’t know
that they did please
Our Master, who, as
settings fare,
Could find more
fitting ones nowhere.
These peasants
grumble for some gold,
Yet have not changed
from days of old
So that Solus could
start off right.
She arrived from her
terrible night
Shaken by loss of
guiding man,
But pleased by his
old gold in hand…
A silent tavern stop
was first,
And with some cheap
ale to quench thirst
She pondered in that
makeshift hall
Maned by one man, who
had served all
Drinks and food each
busy-all day.
Now here’s where Our
Lord has his say
In Solus’s direction.
His
Quest needs chosen
giver, and ‘tis
The great luck of
Hasim Lamont
To lure Solus by what
she wants
The most. He
approached splintered stool
Of Solus (still
pondering about ghouls).
He readied his tongue
of silver,
And, on his approach,
she said
“Fuck off.”
Most brilliant
reader, you’d know
How this could anger
The Lord so.
And though He knows
this trope trick was
Overused in grand
tales, because
Both Hasim and Master
had no
Chance to move on,
Hasim did go
And use magic
(forbid’n in town)
To summon “Orb of
Acid” down
On the face of Solus
afar
To begin a fight in
the bar.
A quick Solus pulled
arrows out
As disgruntled folk
ran about
Angry, yet scared, to
see magic,
Some because acid
made them sick.
Two shots from her
bow did hit arm
Of Lamont before
guards, alarmed
By the panic, told
them to lay
Down weapons. They
complied. Then, away
To Mayor Alea they
were
Dragged. Mayor lifted
head, said, “Sir,
You’ve used magic
again. Do not
Deny… you’re charged
for this a lot.
As for you, mam, what
brings you here?”
“I came to Ustufas to
search for my daughter. Oh please let me go… it was this man who started the
fight, I had nothing to do with it!”
Master did grow sick
of her lies
And treachery, but
could not rise
To tell Alea the
whole truth.
One thumb out of its
place, one tooth
Stuck where it could
not belong would
Tell Solus, ‘Master’s
here.” It could
Destroy his whole
experiment.
Mayor pardoned, so
off she went,
Away from a town plagued
by beasts
She’d fight (in the
plan) and feast
On later with common
people.
But off she walked,
and plan went null.
Glass’s Hollow would
suffer sins
For this: the quest
that could have been.
I'm curious to see where this epic poem will go. Just make sure that the form does not confuse the language and make the story hard to follow.
ReplyDeleteOut of curiosity, what parts were difficult to follow/hard to understand?
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