Hasim Lamont had
planned to give
A quest for treasure
so she’d live
A hard, humbling year
abroad
And learn to truly
love her God.
She was to go to
Rockbarrow,
Led by Hasim, but, as
you know,
She softly declined
his offer.
So He needed new way
to lure
Her North, for she
had set off west.
Then He sent down
eyewing beasts, lest
She’d forever lose
His Gold Path.
Fearful Solus escaped
the wrath
Of these small flies.
She ran away,
Off of her road, into
the fray,
Around scratching
weed and whipper
Following the old
dead river
Through sunbaked
trees. The sun did go
To bed once she
reached Rockbarrow.
She knocked the gate;
there was no sound.
She did observe that
from the ground
Up were oaken walls
to defend.
She nearly left, but
‘round the bend
Came Hasim, for our
Lord forgives
Quickly so that his
quests may live
And not become wasted
graphite.
By coincidence, on
that night
Hasim followed his
strange compass
Of rust looking for
that abyss
Where it’s rumored
that treasure lies.
Hasim arrived with no
disguise
But asked only for
this small deed:
Help get in town,
where compass lead.
She said:
“Ok.”
And together they
hopped the wall
And saw inside no one
at all.
No commoners; no
signs of fight.
And now sun left and
took the light
With her. They
followed the needle
Of rust compass and
nearly fell
Inside the trapdoor
once arrived.
She hatched a plan:
“I’ll go inside, you
stand guard.”
“Happy to serve,”
agreed Hasim,
And with no more
talk, she hopped in
To a small dungeon
with a pit
And nearby ledge to
avoid it.
She walked along and
then stepped on
The trigger. That
caused the wall’s yawn
And with that,
blowdart hit Solus.
“Aha,” did think the
Lord, “And thus
It will happened
again until
She sees the pattern
I have willed
Into these moldy
walls.” Yet hence
He over-guessed
intelligence
Of Solus… she saw no
pattern
Walking her path and
did get burns
From each trigger and
from each dart
That dug her skin. I
know thou art
A clever lad, so you
would see
Each trap was laid in
steps of three,
But Solus spent her
time to build
On other skills and
thus was killed.
I see the shock that
sparked your eyes
At this new turn, so
hear my cries
And sit back down,
for though I speak
The truth when I say
that her cheek
Hit the pit first
when poison won,
Our Lord’s greatest story’s not done.
Interesting choice to have the main character basically kill herself by being stupid. I'm curious to see where the story will go now that Solus is dead.
ReplyDeleteI also like the "ok" line.