Beyond
the crafted wastes of Phal,
Magam’s
spirits, and Teb’s Great Wall
Did
Our Master set railed course
For
this story of loves and force,
Of
scheming kings and wizards mad,
Of
dragons and pits. If you had
Some
imp on your back that must know
Why
these events were chosen so,
Know
this: Our Lord makes all heroes.
They’re
picked by him so they may show
Hope
in the few and Our Master’s
Genius
at stories. As it were,
Our
Lord crafted this world for
Our
heroine, life of this lore,
Named
Solus. She’s sent by a duke
Who
fears that his soul would rebuke
Its
mortal chains. He gave her wealth
To
buy the Tome of Bod’ly Health
From
the north-king of Ustufas;
She’d
receive land if she moved fast.
With
the Duke’s guide, a ship set sail
With
a Solus who could not fail…
For
at this point, she lived a thief
And
filled belly with poor men’s grief,
Which
is why the Duke did tell her
To
steal the Tome if wealth couldn’t lure.
Now,
you do know as well as I
How
evil is to our Lord’s eye…
Does
he not dream that his chosen
Be
good and lawful in prof’sion?
Ahh,
but here’s where Our Good Master
Is
master of stories. This cur
Is
clay to form in our Lord’s thumb,
To
rise and then serve her kingdom.
Lord
does love His servants, it’s true,
But
redeemers are his way to
Show
the power of blest free will
When
it’s sent to Lord for the kill.
Now
I continue. While at sea,
Solus
slept below while the key
To
this whole plan, the guide, was up
On
the deck. When Solus woke, she
Saw
his body slain disgracef’ly:
Skin
dry white, veins replacing eyes.
As
thieves are wont to do, she pries
Through
his possessions. Map and gold
Had
vanished like a ghost. The cold
Winds
gave Solus no hope of sort
As
they blew her into port.
She
was now on this island,
With
no means to do tasks at hand.
Now,
so the list’ner can’t despair,
Know
that Our Master, wise and fair,
Meant
this as a prologue of sorts
And
brought His touch to all. Cohorts
In
form of sea and sky did serve
To
set the perfect stage. The nerve
Of
one to bicker against this!
Now
Solus had control of fists,
Of
eyes raven and fingers swift.
Her
free will’s restored as a gift
Of
Our Lord to prove grace. The sun
Peeks
meekly back; our tale’s begun.
I definitely want to find out where this story goes. Writing it in rhyming verse is an interesting choice, but be careful not to let the form detract from the action and character development. I once watched a reading of a play that had been written entirely in rhyming couplets, which made the dialogue sound very unnatural and long-winded rather than engaging or nuanced. Since I'm guessing your story will probably be more narration than dialogue, you should be all right.
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