tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6915007278611427797.post7562007267866087721..comments2023-08-27T02:17:43.033-07:00Comments on The 52 Week Project: of wires and den-(I hate this title, suggestions?)Elihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06433789042279549889noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6915007278611427797.post-54829250326738063952012-03-23T14:52:11.578-07:002012-03-23T14:52:11.578-07:00"The Red Box," I think might work, thoug..."The Red Box," I think might work, though it is a bit vague. <br />I really liked this story, but I feel I can't critique it accurately since I do not know the references to some of the essential objects (the red box, the MP). Don't dumb down the story for people like me, though... this is still interesting stuff!Nick Edingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11987651341572934920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6915007278611427797.post-80559272712595430532012-03-22T23:31:57.256-07:002012-03-22T23:31:57.256-07:00Adorable. I want it to be a graphic novel.Adorable. I want it to be a graphic novel.Brynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07312559694365248804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6915007278611427797.post-75163835501643710262012-03-20T09:31:48.581-07:002012-03-20T09:31:48.581-07:00Good dark humor. I like the hierarchy of the racc...Good dark humor. I like the hierarchy of the raccoon tribe, but you also mentioned some other animals living in the station at the beginning. Are those tribes affected by what happens, or did the raccoon tribe force out all the non-raccoons at some point in the past? I'd like to know a little more about the civilization of the filling station.<br />As for the title, it does seem like a bit of a labored pun. If more was said about how the raccoons use wires to build and maintain their den, that title might feel more justified.ERIC L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13216007825025566129noreply@blogger.com